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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-25 03:55:16 | the new housekeeper pt 1 | ignore the complaining whinger from 10-24, it's a good story, please don't hesitate with the second part |
| 2007-10-26 22:22:45 | the new housekeeper pt 1 | who the fuck looks at porn and concentrates on the grammar?! |
| 2007-10-27 00:39:06 | the new housekeeper pt 1 | a great beginning. you need to prolong the sexual description , enabling the reader to experience the emotion of the victim. |
| 2007-10-27 22:45:19 | the new housekeeper pt 1 | I do not wish to stop you from writing. As a fellow writer I enjoy reading other stories very much. However as to grammar and spelling...in just the last 8 lines there are 9 mistakes that you could have corrected. There were 4 misspelled words, 3 not capitalized, and Mr and Mrs should really have a period. It did not stop me from reading it but it is distracting even if it is porn as one reader said. You really need a spell checker. Bear in mind that this is your 6th story and that only 1 out of every 200 voted and then only 1 out of every 2,000 bothered to give you a comment. I intend to read your other stories and I thank you for submitting them here. If you feel you need a proofreader send me a private message. I would be happy to do that for you. |
| 2007-11-05 00:01:43 | the new housekeeper pt 1 | ya, you had some mistakes, but who cares? it wasnt as bad as some stories. continue! this is great! |