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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-01 22:35:30 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | You are amazing man, I don't really read these things to get off, I just love to read. And you find great literature in the strangest places. You have an amazing talent, I hope you become famous someday mate. From writer to writer, Good luck. |
| 2007-10-03 02:20:50 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | Damn good story u should start making adult books u would be famous quick.. thanks for the good read pls make more.. |
| 2007-10-03 14:11:37 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | Waiting for #6 |
| 2007-10-05 08:04:44 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | Good story, good dialogue, good diction. I used to be heavy into writing, erotica and other such titles, but, not too much as of late, I might break back into it. But, I doubt it. Either way, your stories are inspiring and an upbeat change from the mundane, thumbs up. What I see that some commenters might not, though, is you don't have to change the story line in any drastic ways. Just a little subplot here and there, it'll shake things up, maybe. Things like, give him an attitude change from some personally cataclysmal event that may take place. Death of a friend? Introducing new characters this far on in the series can only weaken credibility. Hope I've given you some insight, look forward to reading number six, bro. Good on ya. |
| 2007-10-05 13:54:20 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | Thanks man, thats the kind of comment I like to see, not that I don't appreciate compliments, but I would like to know what I can improve upon, so thanks. And about that cataclysmic event, that happens in seven, you can see the "buildup" in the end of six. And characters like Natalia are WAY too much fun to write to be left out sry. Seven should be up in a day or two btw. |