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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-05 14:06:18 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | I mean six whoops! lol. Six will be up in a day or so, not seven. |
| 2007-10-11 19:10:55 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | i wonder what oriana looks like you have to get pics even though its a made up story. |
| 2007-10-23 12:37:55 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | awesome....... |
| 2007-11-17 23:57:34 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | AWESOME TO THE MAX |
| 2007-11-20 12:12:34 | My Sister Ashley chapter 5 | "either way, your stories are inspiring and an upbeat change from the mundane, thumbs up. what i see that some commenters might not, though, is you don't have to change the story line in any drastic ways. just a little subplot here and there, it'll shake things up, maybe. things like, give him an attitude change from some personally cataclysmal event that may take place. death of a friend? introducing new characters this far on in the series can only weaken credibility." I agree 101%. Great writing still, keep it up! |