| 2007-09-29 22:45:46 |
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Story mostly good, spelling bad... |
| 2007-09-30 11:16:53 |
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I agree with some of the other coments on two points...One, your spelling needs work and Two, great incest story. More please. 8/10 |
| 2007-10-01 05:12:04 |
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I love these stories. Not because I picture my family members but because its taboo. Its exciting, its "wrong."
9/10 - spelling was completely tolerable, my only problem was how short it is, it leaves me hungry for more. |
| 2007-10-01 07:23:44 |
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eagerly waiting for what happened next & surely how excited it was |
| 2007-10-01 19:46:37 |
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Well done. Let's see what part 2 is like. Spelling could be improved, but the story was fine. |