| 2007-10-08 05:00:06 |
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this was the best incest story i ever read. keep on writing a second part |
| 2007-10-09 12:19:07 |
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I thought this was excellently written. I hope you continue this story line. |
| 2007-10-09 15:53:46 |
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the best i have seen a long time me,mum,and sister liked it 10/10 |
| 2007-10-09 18:16:45 |
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I'll give it an 8/10, but it could use a little smart editing and spelling work. And, please, do not pay any attention to these morons who'll write to say they don't care if you know how to spell or not. proper spelling is essential to any writer's work. Anybody who thinks it doesn't matter is a dumb-ass of the first order. |
| 2007-10-10 05:33:43 |
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Hey if u are so particular about some fucking minor spelling errors, please go back to be your teacher's pet in elementary school. porn is not the thing for you, acting like such a wuss and a pussy. maybe you would like to know how to spell nincompoop you asshole. good story. 8/10 |