| 2007-10-30 11:06:11 |
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NOTE to last commentor-- as the author of this 'original' story, i can truthfully say that this story has never appeared on any site but this one! i wrote this story recently and posted it for the first time this month! i challenge anyone to find my original tale on any other site! |
| 2007-10-30 12:29:00 |
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hey this isn't a story about incest...he's not really her father, just her mother's ex-husband this is a story about two consenting adults! A good one though! |
| 2007-10-30 23:55:54 |
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v. art house in style, nice and florid use of language, not sure about a "heart rejoiced in uninhibited, orgasmic celebration" tho.. |
| 2007-10-31 13:41:10 |
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Oh Fuck I want to be your Daddy I want my prick in your sweet pussy and come and come no protection just lots beautifull fucking |
| 2007-11-01 20:42:05 |
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Great story and looking for the part 2 |