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Date Story title Comment
2007-11-02 22:45:20 FORBIDDEN FRUIT (1) Very well writing story
2007-11-03 06:48:56 FORBIDDEN FRUIT (1) sick mofo! get a day job

stick men unite!
2007-11-03 18:12:28 FORBIDDEN FRUIT (1) I wish i could find a pussy eater this good for myself.
2007-11-04 01:57:02 FORBIDDEN FRUIT (1) Wonderful story, well written, I like it a lot, and am going to look for part 2 and read it as well.
2007-11-13 16:03:32 FORBIDDEN FRUIT (1) She grabbed the hem of that pretty, pink shirt, pulled it over her head, and tossed it across the room. Her thin, white panties slipped off quickly and followed the bra as they too flew across the kitchen.

You said she wasn't wearing a bra, least you could do is keep in character, the story is nice, you overwrote parts of it though, that made it too long, and a tad boring. I'd give you a 8/10 though.
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