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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-12 21:14:17 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | Great story. But you use wanton too much? And I think it would be better if you stuck with making people read the 1st part 1st. Cause you repeated yourself trying to almost "repeat" the 1st part of this story. Overall I give it a 9/10. |
| 2007-10-13 00:49:57 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | love it |
| 2007-10-13 17:43:09 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | broaden your vocabulary. |
| 2007-10-14 18:27:00 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | i wasn't focusing on the story but the grammatix, i like the way you used the words. |
| 2007-10-16 01:26:41 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | both are fantastic.... more.... 10/10.... |