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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-19 05:14:43 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | not sure if your really from the country, but i lived with my grandma on a farm for a while and you know how to capture the accent really well, i liked how you captured a southern mindset with the short sayings like "they say..." wonderful job overall. |
| 2007-10-19 14:08:36 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | great story |
| 2007-10-19 14:45:08 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | great story |
| 2007-10-21 13:52:17 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | write more chapters |
| 2007-10-21 15:59:21 | FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2) | hurry up and write more of this story , cant wait to read some more of this . excellent writing i give it a 10 overall . great work |