| 2007-11-02 15:40:16 |
My summer boss
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Well written. The emotions were scintillating. I do think their first coupling should have been more animalistic, especially on her part, after such a long build up. |
| 2007-11-02 17:49:43 |
My summer boss
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You need to think about professionally writing as this was the best story I have ever read to date. |
| 2007-11-02 23:17:31 |
My summer boss
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I NEVER post comments on here, but this is remarkable. Congratulations.. |
| 2007-11-02 23:57:33 |
My summer boss
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dude u have 2 do a part 2 |
| 2007-11-03 08:03:38 |
My summer boss
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Well done, i like it. |