| 2007-11-05 16:04:02 |
My summer boss
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damn man that was the fucking best story i have ever read you didn't do some crappy 10 sentence fuck fest it was a real story with real structure |
| 2007-11-05 20:02:57 |
My summer boss
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This must be some pro writer, to good for amatuer, and if this story is true, then gj |
| 2007-11-05 20:59:41 |
My summer boss
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fuckin hell that was seriously the best story ever i loved the way the tension builds up your really good at this well done :) |
| 2007-11-05 22:58:36 |
My summer boss
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Would LOVE to see a sequal to this! |
| 2007-11-06 06:37:21 |
My summer boss
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well ,your sounds were missing but on a whole a nice story |