| 2007-11-04 09:15:00 |
My summer boss
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HOLY SHIT!!! fuckin amazin! |
| 2007-11-04 13:28:07 |
My summer boss
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amazing story, pretty believeable. i'd really like to see some sequals |
| 2007-11-04 23:09:56 |
My summer boss
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you are an awesome writer. there were a couple of mistakes, but it is nothing a little proof reading wouldn't fix. good job. |
| 2007-11-05 03:08:17 |
My summer boss
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I must say, I've read some pretty amazing stories on this site...but your build-up to the final fuck...wow. 10 stars if I ever saw a worthy story. |
| 2007-11-05 14:15:36 |
My summer boss
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I loved the fact that it build up tension through the whole story! U are a great writer! |