| 2008-01-29 15:31:55 |
My summer boss
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The built up was not too long and i think you a great writer and know how to create anticipation for your readers, congratulations on a great story mate. |
| 2008-02-06 00:30:31 |
My summer boss
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This story is fuckin' awesome. The build up gave it a nice kick. |
| 2008-02-13 05:26:40 |
My summer boss
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very good story with nice build-up |
| 2008-02-14 15:20:02 |
My summer boss
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okay at last -- wasn't sure i could finish before cumming all over my naked knees |
| 2008-02-15 19:47:33 |
My summer boss
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I've always been just a silent reader on this site, but this story needs a comment. Your story, unlike so many others, had believability behind it. I really enjoy it when authors take time to describe more than just the wetness of a woman. That you never used the phrase "8-1/2 inch cock" is a testament to your abilities. You made this story sexy without being gratuitously lewd. Yes, Tom's naivetee was a little distracting, but still, it was a job well done. Congratulations. |