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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-02-27 00:13:42 | My summer boss | verrrrrrry nice. build up was just right. had an excellent ammount of believability. and the innocence of tom made the final act that much better. experienced girls teaching inexperienced guys is insanely hot. I really enjoyed the way you wrote though, you put alot of comedy into it that wasnt forced, but real "grip on me was almost indescribable, fuck that it was indescribable" such as this, it almost gives the feel that you are telling it to the reader face to face, and you correct yourself in your sentence. gives it that extra oomph |
| 2008-03-01 10:23:32 | My summer boss | Wonderfully done with just the right amount of detail. Tom was very shy around girls so it was believeable that he could be a virgin. Eve seemed to be a mature lady who was on the mends and was very vunerable. She was lucky to have Tom as a friend. It is sometimes nice to read about sex between friends with no attachments. Sex can be just raw sex with no commitments. Very well done. ty |
| 2008-03-02 23:54:31 | My summer boss | dear 2/15 or should i say von armand it's nice to vote constantly for yourself and write your own comments please let your story be judged by itself. theis was 5/10 |
| 2008-03-03 03:49:31 | My summer boss | previous reader; you think this author is bad, you should read the 'lady jade' stories & 'double trouble' by quinn315. the first four pages of each are him placing positive comments on his 'abortion' !! this story is ok. 6/10 |
| 2008-03-03 14:28:43 | My summer boss | Cool, if you don't like my story just say so, don't accuse me of voting for myself and writing my own comments. You think because it's more than a sentance saying "fuck man that shit was killa, busted a nut" or "that was shit" that I wrote it? there's more than a hundred comments, I don't need to write them. |