| 2008-03-22 17:41:57 |
My summer boss
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my god man, what are you in school for, english writing ? lol im loving your stories ha, this and my sister ashley are series , should publish a novel with short stories like these 10/10 |
| 2008-03-25 15:49:16 |
My summer boss
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Not bad, You are a good writter ,but you still have a few basic problems with commas and semicolons, and you need to correct those if you write anything seriously, just some helpful comments |
| 2008-03-25 17:43:52 |
My summer boss
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I have problems with that kinda stuff, it wasn't covered very well in school, so I blame the system lol. But if you know how all that jazz works, please I'm begging you PM me or something, I'm dying to know how to use them correctly instead of guessing and letting spellcheck catch everything. |
| 2008-03-27 23:43:11 |
My summer boss
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dude keep on writing. Although this isn't as good as the "my sister Ashley" series , it was still pretty good 9/10 |
| 2008-03-31 10:53:57 |
My summer boss
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are you the next c.poalini, 'cause if your not,,, well let's just say i am going to be fuckin' dissappointed. By the way next time you use this writeout format, use word! Its really good to see |