| 2008-04-21 00:52:24 |
DNA Chapter 2
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Great story once again, but you let yourself down with simple spelling and grammatical errors. |
| 2007-10-26 11:24:41 |
A night of change
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Hu, wow. Sounds pretty good. I like the way you describe her powers, the sex and how she transformates;) |
| 2007-10-27 16:47:10 |
A night of change
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you have a great style and the words just seemed to roll off my tongue as i read. very good |
| 2007-10-30 05:24:35 |
A night of change
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Not a bad yarn at all |
| 2007-11-11 06:57:46 |
A night of change
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boring |