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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-25 11:48:47 | Bunny | great story, need to continue with a part 2 & maybe a part 3 |
| 2007-10-25 13:24:15 | Bunny | A bit short, but hot. I liked it. One thing, several other commentators said that the spelling was good. I disagree. OK ...it was only one word. Read through and see if you can find it. If not, I'll tell you when you do the next installment. 9/10 |
| 2007-10-26 02:29:11 | Bunny | Well George in cincy if there is a spelling mistake in this story I cannot find it. The story is great cannot wait for chapter 2. I am guessing the mistake is in the fact it is English and not American lol |
| 2007-10-27 02:41:06 | Bunny | Hey, nice story there. you have great narration for explaining about morbid teenage fantasies. keep this up, plus more initimate sexual encounters and you would do very well. 8/10 |
| 2007-10-27 17:09:14 | Bunny | Some of you commenters are wasting your time by writing about the grammar etc. The story is great and yet you say nothing about the content and the manner in which "things" move along in the story. We all wish that we had our own BUNNY or something similar sitting beside us while reading the story--One hand on the MOUSE and the other hand on her PUSSY. Gave it a 9/10 only because it was rather short. |