| 2007-10-28 23:02:50 |
Bunny
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The word you mispelled was straight. You typed in strait, which not far off, is still incorrect. Other than that, fantastic story, albeit a bit short. 9/10. |
| 2007-10-30 17:27:52 |
Bunny
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The best thing about this storey is the fact that it starts out with "chapter one". So? two? |
| 2007-11-06 04:23:00 |
Bunny
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great story even with the one misspell one of the better grammars ive read. i'll be waiting on bunny 2 if you could on that one the describe bunny a lil bit |
| 2007-11-06 10:20:07 |
Bunny
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Very good, my rating for it would be higher if I knew for sertain that there was more to come. |
| 2008-02-16 08:31:18 |
Bunny
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hey when are u gunna make a bunny chapter 2????? cant wait and great story 2 |