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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-27 21:06:23 | Inside Me: C06 | You captured the moment! Delightful with a little self imagination applied... excellent job! Keep it up, with a little more experience you'll be selling "straight" stories before you know it. I think you have the gift! |
| 2007-10-28 01:23:58 | Inside Me: C06 | fucking awesome, great job. cant wait for the next chapter. 10/10 |
| 2007-10-28 10:01:23 | Inside Me: C06 | Great effort and good story. you are getting the hang of this so keep it up. 8/10 |
| 2007-10-28 10:19:45 | Inside Me: C06 | Nicely done. 9/10 |
| 2007-10-28 13:12:34 | Inside Me: C06 | Good stuff indeed. A little thing that made me laugh was how the narration of her thoughts and her actual speech don't exactly match. I mean she thinks like a little kid but speaks like someone much older. I cant recall if you explained that or not but i just thought it was amusing. Again good job Hanes! I hope to see more from you in the future. |