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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-28 10:08:22 | My Favorite Babysitter, Part II | The story is fair. But you do keep using the same ideas in your stories such as moving the hair in order to see the cock sliding back and forth in her mouth. We would all do this if the woman has long hair that is in the way of a great view. No need to comment on grammar etc., others will be doing that for me. At least you have a 7 incher which is ok compared to the 9 inchers that so many bullshitters have. Gave it a 7. |
| 2007-10-28 18:02:16 | My Favorite Babysitter, Part II | A) My grammar really is not bad at all, I bet that I know more about writing than you B) Why do you care so much about grammar; it is a fucking erotic story C) Maybe I describe things that everybody might do because they actually happen. Also, I said she was about 60 because that is how old she actually is. And as a matter of fact, she is gorgous despite her relatively old age. |
| 2007-10-28 18:57:05 | My Favorite Babysitter, Part II | I was just wondering how part one of this story is Fantasy and the second is labled True Story??? Grammar is a big part of a story making it easy to read without trying to guess what you are trying to say. Gave you a 5. |
| 2007-10-28 19:25:58 | My Favorite Babysitter, Part II | Fantasy is mixed in with what really happened to make it a better story. And would someone give me some examples of my grammatical errors? |
| 2007-11-01 23:56:07 | My Favorite Babysitter, Part II | u suck |