| 2007-12-04 14:00:32 |
Steffi the Sophomore
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Very well done. Part two should be great. |
| 2007-12-04 16:53:06 |
Steffi the Sophomore
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Excellent story. If I was G I think I would have had a heart attack at the end. The time flying in that scrnario was very easy to believe. |
| 2007-12-05 03:49:24 |
Steffi the Sophomore
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Impressive writing. |
| 2007-12-05 19:20:27 |
Steffi the Sophomore
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Very impressive story! You are one of the few writers I have discovered as of yet that actually has excellent writing talent. 10/10 |
| 2007-12-10 18:21:18 |
Steffi the Sophomore
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thats one hell of a good story keep em cuming |