| 2007-11-29 14:42:49 |
The Slave Trainers--Part Three
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Story wise very mild when compared to the first two. well written you have talent, keep up the good work. |
| 2007-11-30 22:51:21 |
The Slave Trainers--Part Three
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i liked the story but the girls should be at least 12 i think. im a babe and were kind of sensitive about that, but good story. |
| 2007-12-01 06:13:03 |
The Slave Trainers--Part Three
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I'll say it again... this story is based on a real investigation, but I have dramatized it... the first person character I use is an amalgamation of several people who were involved. |
| 2007-12-01 13:11:59 |
The Slave Trainers--Part Three
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More, please. Please, more! |
| 2007-12-04 18:15:48 |
The Slave Trainers--Part Three
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please, dont't make me wait another nine months for part four. I love this story. And if babes like your stories, your definitely on the right way. |