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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-12-04 07:33:39 | Jayna the Genie | Are you sure you are 23 you write like you are 13. That was very unimaginative and boring. Don't embarass yourself with a second try at it. |
2007-12-04 13:23:39 | Jayna the Genie | waaaaaaw you are the best |
2007-12-04 13:52:08 | Jayna the Genie | third best story on the site according to me. ("my sister the bitch " and "wendy and miss west" are a little bit better but not much) |
2007-12-04 16:51:04 | Jayna the Genie | I thought it was good, but like one guy said he thought you were 13. I doubt you actually are 13 but i think you can tell in the writing that it wasnt as good as it could be. Although i still thought it was really good. |
2007-12-04 18:29:54 | Jayna the Genie | to the guy who didnt like it, could you please tell me why? i'll try to improve the next one i don't take criticism badly, i appreciate it |