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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-12-05 18:03:57 | Jayna the Genie | I loved the story but I think u need 2 work on ur details u didn't talk about ur height and weight till l8er on so the story got kinda weird but other then that I like its a really good change from all the incest stories on this site |
| 2007-12-05 20:39:58 | Jayna the Genie | One of the best i read. Very Good! 10/10 |
| 2007-12-06 00:18:40 | Jayna the Genie | AMAZING! made me so wet! Thank you so much, I loved your writing, please write part 2! 10/10 |
| 2007-12-06 03:44:31 | Jayna the Genie | 10/10 for shooo... Great Story man. Please write a part 2,3..... we need more. please dont spoil the fun in this by dragging bull shit coz this is a good story. just continue the flow and do something creative, which everyone would like. make her shape shift and u know make him the new man in the block kinda stuff |
| 2007-12-06 07:46:44 | Jayna the Genie | Nice. A good story. I give it a 7/10. It was decently written, with a few holes. A little more description would have been better, but it got the ah... POINT across nicely:P. Also "Z?" is a reference to another author/cartoon writer. Name of Jhonen Vasquez. Wrote and directed the cartoon Invader Zim and wrote and illustrated the comic Johnny the Homicidal Maniac. Basically Z? is something to the effect of "Got sleep? or "Got Z'z?" |