| 2008-02-25 15:41:09 |
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Clever. |
| 2008-02-25 16:46:04 |
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| 2008-02-25 17:52:55 |
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Good but a bit similar to the Liquid Mind Machine series, no? I sense a mind-control fetish JMT... |
| 2008-02-25 18:21:58 |
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I'd say it's too similar to Program Alpha-Omega. If you've ever read the story, then this story is almost like that one. |
| 2008-02-25 20:16:20 |
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Truth is I'm running out of story ideas after submitting 60+ of them. I guess it is a bit similar to Liquid Mind Machine but a different method of delivery. I’ve never read the alpha-omega story, I usually don’t read anything on here because I want my thoughts to be original.
Jmt |