| 2008-02-25 20:21:19 |
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10.. love ur work |
| 2008-02-25 22:33:34 |
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even if it is alike, it is still a great story that deserves a part 2 |
| 2008-02-26 00:31:04 |
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nice!!!!! |
| 2008-02-26 09:58:38 |
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A good fantasy story. I would like to know for sure what happens to the two jerk boyfriends. Personally, I hope they get caught sucking each other's dick or ass fucking so that they would be humiliated. As a fairly smart guy AND a former jock, I know how stupid those types are. They deserve all they get. |
| 2008-02-27 00:12:40 |
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good fantasy, good read. Just a tip don't use the "Oh gawd" rather redundant. try to find something else that fits better. it's just an overly used phrase. |