| 2004-04-23 22:56:29 |
Wife fucked_(1)
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Why don't you just call me next time you want something to write about |
| 2004-04-30 19:28:21 |
Wife fucked_(1)
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it could've been a good story by drawing it out. add details, the hubby doing her while she's still passed out, then revealing the truth to her for a wide-awake 3-some. just a couple thoughts...try again |
| 2004-06-01 00:15:04 |
Wife fucked_(1)
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Good Start. Write some more fuck scenes. |
| 2005-07-11 02:46:22 |
Wife fucked_(1)
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Good start.Short but sweet. Not too keen on the unconscious bit tho. |
| 2007-10-26 14:55:32 |
Wife fucked_(1)
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short and sweet. should have had the wife makes some noises also, even though she was knocked out. |