sexstories.com

Comments from READER

«<340334043405340634073408340934103411341234133414>»
Date Story title Comment
2005-02-15 23:20:30 Hippy Girl Rud Hrnyone-
What exactly do you mean "the story all of sudden came from another viewpoint?"

The story is written in 3rd person, with occasional references to what Rich is thinking. Did I miss something?

And thanks to all for your comments (both good and bad).

Andrew
2005-02-16 04:53:12 Hippy Girl You're a writer! Well done. I was quite moved at moments. A hugh score ain't easy.
2005-02-17 17:09:52 Hippy Girl i loved your story and got my jollies about half way through. verry good i give you a 10/10
2005-02-24 05:18:51 Hippy Girl I can't help it when the desire comes to look up a woman's skirt.
2005-02-27 20:38:06 Hippy Girl Nice story - a bit short - probably needs more sex and more background ^^ but great job, for a short hot story its a 10/10
«<340334043405340634073408340934103411341234133414>»