| 2004-02-10 20:04:14 |
Polished Ebony_(0)
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Grammar and spelling errors |
| 2004-02-18 01:24:51 |
Polished Ebony_(0)
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omg... that was terrible. spelling problems. too much oil. just plain yuck. |
| 2004-03-26 15:28:11 |
Polished Ebony_(0)
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i personally enjoyed it, spelling and grammar was poor but i loved the feel of the story, It was almost primal and animalistic. |
| 2004-02-10 20:04:14 |
Polished Ebony_(1)
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Grammar and spelling errors |
| 2004-02-18 01:24:51 |
Polished Ebony_(1)
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omg... that was terrible. spelling problems. too much oil. just plain yuck. |