| 2005-12-01 08:07:01 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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good story but needs some spicier words |
| 2005-12-29 18:45:13 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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great story-sounds like a real happening-can't wait to read the rest |
| 2006-02-19 11:56:35 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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Great fist chapter |
| 2006-03-08 00:22:18 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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I think this chapter was good but I think the wording should havebeen dirtyer and more detail but all in all I loved it 7.5 |
| 2006-05-11 00:44:08 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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super hot! I hope the next ones are as good. |