| 2006-08-07 06:11:57 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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really good story,it is buuilding up to something very interesing. I'm eager to read the other chapters |
| 2007-11-11 15:31:55 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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This chapter is moving along at a fine pace. I'll now read chapter two. A great bulid up to it. |
| 2007-11-24 14:34:59 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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I understand that the story is being told from Kay's point of view, but would have like it better if it wasn't in 3rd party when referring to others. |
| 2008-01-11 01:45:36 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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This storry is truely fine. It was refreshing to read somthing posted here with out having to bog through the depth of unneededprofanity and "Dirty talk" or the almost inescapable 'get to the action' type of writing that is normaly found on this site. The weight of the emotional setting during the final scean was nearly palapable. I thank you for this writing, and hope to see more in the future. |
| 2004-05-05 11:37:28 |
1derful tease ch. 02
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excellent follow up to part 1. |