| 2004-07-02 18:48:56 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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omg u fucking nerds who the fuck cares about grammer/punctuation and all that other shit? |
| 2004-07-13 05:09:28 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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you guys are fucking fags.. it's not like it's a fuckin novel.. it doesn't have to have correct punctuation and grammar.. you can still figure out what the hell they're trying to say.. |
| 2004-07-15 23:27:25 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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i thought it was a very good story,keep up the good work. |
| 2004-08-11 06:03:38 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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I enjoyed the story. Like someof theother comments, I would like to see more action,but can wait for it in the future. Some ideas i would like you to consider would be the obvious fondling and sex. After a few times the regular anticipation of ongoing sex with details you could look at sharing your dsd with your girlfriend. |
| 2004-08-20 01:22:17 |
1derful tease ch. 01
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luved the story can't wait for the next one you write! |