| 2004-09-23 19:26:08 |
Inbetween my Thighs
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I-thought-your-poem-was-qui... |
| 2004-11-24 20:04:39 |
Inbetween my Thighs
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As you old me tight ? |
| 2005-03-04 06:13:31 |
Inbetween my Thighs
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Not all poetry has to rhyme people. That was great |
| 2004-06-08 23:54:04 |
Quickie_(0)
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Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Post corrections. |
| 2004-06-13 23:24:09 |
Quickie_(0)
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Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. post corrections. Use more euphonisms or none at all. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both. |