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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-06-18 17:46:15 | Woman on Top | So where is it going???????????????????/ |
| 2004-10-02 11:10:21 | Woman on Top | I'e never read such inane drivel in all my life. I must congratulate you in being able to render me completely dumbfounded by the level of your ineptitude!!! Go back to School and LISTEN this time!!! I think the problem is your two tense |
| 2004-10-02 11:18:01 | Woman on Top | I've found more sexual satisfaction from masturbation with a cheese-grater, painful at first, and really just painful from there on in. Try writing in English sometime, you might enjoy that as much as the sex you are trying to depict. |
| 2005-05-30 08:11:35 | Woman on Top | A note from the writer..the change in pronouns was intended to make it more personal, both to me (yes I am female) and the reader. and to KY King and Monkeyspanker - I haven't seen your names on the author list... Thank you to those with constructive criticism. |
| 2004-06-14 06:29:06 | A Simple Beginning | Oh gimme a break! |