2004-06-26 12:46:06 |
A Simple Beginning Gone Twisted
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Cannibilism is sick in my opinion. But this is a well written story with a somewhat suspenseful plotline. One problem I have with it is that there is great detail in the beginning but not that much towards the end. Good story in my opinion. |
2004-06-26 16:49:59 |
A Simple Beginning Gone Twisted
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wow thats ummmmm different, way different |
2004-06-27 22:04:03 |
A Simple Beginning Gone Twisted
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ok....calm down and sorta look at your life |
2004-06-28 05:11:03 |
A Simple Beginning Gone Twisted
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I don't find the subject matter to my liking but I decided to read and rate this story for you. The story was very well written, only a few spelling / punctuation errors. Still a very well written story grammaticly. I feel you should continue writing but if this is how you are in real life... Look at your life and how your living it and then think if you still want to be this way. |
2004-07-01 09:59:18 |
A Simple Beginning Gone Twisted
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sukt. |