| 2004-06-29 18:15:40 |
Lexy and Me: Lexy and Her Friend
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still waiting to hear what Jack Sprat has to say. . . . . . |
| 2004-06-30 17:01:49 |
Lexy and Me: Lexy and Her Friend
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that story was one of the best ive ever read and the only one ive ever posted a comment for, please please please write a sequel! |
| 2004-07-02 00:31:53 |
Lexy and Me: Lexy and Her Friend
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Zeppelin you kick ass! i've read all your stories and i love all of them!! i cant wait for summer fun part 4!!! |
| 2004-07-03 16:42:22 |
Lexy and Me: Lexy and Her Friend
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Well written story. It was a bit too normal/legal for me to get a rise. Don't say it is a fantasy at the start. I assume that most stories are fantasies anyway, but I don't need to be reminded of this. Write something a bit more kinky. Everybody just writes stories about people who immediately want to start fucking at the drop of a hat. There is no pursuit, no hunt, no persuasion/coercion/blackma... or seduction. It's just like my friends immediately wanted to start fucking. I guess that's what you get from watching too many pornos where the only point of seduction is "Hi Babe, wanna fuck ?" |
| 2004-07-03 21:09:19 |
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finally, some decent advice. thanx sprat |