| 2005-01-24 01:33:48 |
All in a day's work!
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gr8 story dude..........but u culd have put a little more action.......just a suggestion......... liked ur style of answering critics |
| 2005-02-20 06:51:29 |
All in a day's work!
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good pelling,punctuation etc.go to english literature sites but don't expect co-workers masturbating and havig anal sex.if thats what you want stay here.whine about something or you're not satisfied. |
| 2005-06-05 17:51:33 |
All in a day's work!
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dull crap |
| 2004-06-18 09:37:14 |
Aunt Beth
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This story sux. It is not a fairy tale, everything being so simple.... |
| 2004-06-18 10:38:55 |
Aunt Beth
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Not at all beleivable, but fun anyway. slow down and connect you thoughts and tell us with a lot of description. |