| 2004-07-04 15:07:38 |
Aunt Beth
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first off are you people all fucking stupid, you complain its not realistic. It is fictiondumb fucks, doesn;t have to be realistic. If it were realistic it would be over in 2 minutes if any of yuguys could last that long. |
| 2004-07-05 18:34:24 |
Aunt Beth
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I learned long ago...that this is entertainment....the author writes you the reader reads and we are all entertained.....not a bad story though a little thin. But Please write more! Entertain us again asap |
| 2004-07-05 20:15:20 |
Aunt Beth
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Well, how many people do fuck their aunts? Still it's pretty good, keep up. |
| 2004-07-06 02:19:09 |
Aunt Beth
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not a very good story. . .need more anticipation. . .try again |
| 2004-07-06 07:15:08 |
Aunt Beth
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Allright story. The storyline was excellent even though Rachel wasn't in the beginning of the story. It could be better with some improvements such as a little more description and a little more realism. True it's fiction, but a little more realism helps enhance the story a bit. I just wonder why most of these comments related to the fact that the kid puts away groceries for his mom. I didn't think twice about it. I put away groceries for my mom all the time. I'm almost 19. It's kinda bad when you don't help your mom out every once and a while, but I digress here. Good story but needs improvement. |