| 2004-06-29 17:00:49 |
Aunt Beth
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wow...thats pretty funny...it did the job for me...maybe the guy should of been like 17 or 18...instead of 15...but nice job! |
| 2004-06-29 17:34:25 |
Aunt Beth
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Kinda of a gay story. I didn't like it. The author is one sick fuck. |
| 2004-06-30 02:28:04 |
Aunt Beth
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I think its a good story. All you people who criticize the author for his story lets see you write one.......no comment???.... exactally. |
| 2004-06-30 22:21:49 |
Aunt Beth
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this sucks, so unbelievable |
| 2004-07-01 01:41:17 |
Aunt Beth
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Didn't blow my horn I'm afraid.....and the writing's none too great but you must have something....look at the number of reads and the rating ???!!?? Keep trying |