| 2005-07-06 12:42:38 |
The Selection - Part One
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Great story....but when is part 2 |
| 2005-12-12 18:31:22 |
The Selection - Part One
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more...please...before my semen stops flowing! |
| 2007-07-13 13:19:06 |
The Selection - Part One
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Great writing! I can't wait for the intensity of part 2. |
| 2004-06-18 10:29:03 |
Lust_(1)
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A bit jumpy, and lacking in description to be totally enjoyable. A mental story without all the background to be complete. |
| 2004-06-18 11:18:05 |
Lust_(1)
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Teenage lust is so easy to write about. How could you mess it up? |