| 2004-06-19 05:55:23 |
the first time i got laid
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first and foremost, detalis. Second, that thing is SO difficult to read... Grammar anyone? Other than that, good job. |
| 2004-06-20 11:30:43 |
the first time i got laid
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not kinda short....kinda shit! i agree with orgasmic! ur 18 and u dont know how the fuck to use grammar? |
| 2004-06-21 06:16:08 |
the first time i got laid
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lame |
| 2004-06-21 23:22:59 |
the first time i got laid
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Unreal |
| 2004-06-22 01:36:55 |
the first time i got laid
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the author of this story sucks balls dog... |