| 2004-09-22 23:28:16 |
Lust_(1)
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Oh my...went from doggie style to him cumming on your lips and boobies? he must be a strong shooter to shoot up underneath you like that. Also he's on top and your trying to get his shaft to touch your clit?? is he not inside you? it would be a really good story if there were more descriptions, no smilelys, and better english. |
| 2005-06-13 17:50:03 |
Lust_(1)
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if you dont like it STFU!!! i thought it was prty good.... |
| 2007-09-28 11:05:15 |
Lust_(1)
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Wow, there are like som many things I want to do to you right now, wow! Love the story. 11/10, Wow you're a hottie. |
| 2004-06-18 22:44:49 |
the first time i got laid
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Needs more details! Kinda Short |
| 2004-06-18 23:07:06 |
the first time i got laid
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u got a good thing going with the story but u need details and a longer story. also the many more adventures shouldent be other stories. lol j/k u do what u want but i really did like the story it just needs to be longer. |