| 2005-07-20 05:38:39 |
the first time i got laid
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Yeah, more peroids....you went to fast slow it down man |
| 2005-07-31 20:21:16 |
the first time i got laid
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this sucked. its called a period okay. use them. |
| 2005-10-11 21:11:46 |
the first time i got laid
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I thought it was very good story yes puncuation is important and u did go a little fast and more detaile would have been GREAT but it was still good!! |
| 2005-10-20 01:07:40 |
the first time i got laid
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... not tuching this one |
| 2006-01-02 14:44:27 |
the first time i got laid
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this fuckin thing suck like ass |