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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-08-18 14:24:00 | the first time i got laid | u r not 18. and if u r i bet u failed english. here's some advice, take writer's craft. dont be discourage...keep writing |
| 2004-08-23 02:11:29 | the first time i got laid | people who don't want to waste their time on piece of shit writing with no punctuation can't read english? Give me a break, dipshit. this might have been decent, I didn't even read it, english includes punctuation, if you don't use it, don't call it english |
| 2004-08-29 23:22:37 | the first time i got laid | that wuz fucking crap. Learn to wright. |
| 2004-09-01 09:38:48 | the first time i got laid | this fucking sucked. Trying writting in complete sentences not on long sentence. Not to mention the whole story was bullshit. |
| 2004-09-02 23:01:33 | the first time i got laid | THIS WAS THE BIGGEST LOAD OF BULL SHIT I HAVE EVER, AND I MEAN EVER, READ. |