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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-09-04 04:54:35 | the first time i got laid | its called puntuation its this thing involving periods commas complete sentences paragrahps and oh look a duck what is with the double spacing thats totally lame |
| 2004-09-06 09:01:31 | the first time i got laid | THIS ROCKS SO STOP DISSIN |
| 2004-09-15 01:15:24 | the first time i got laid | is it me, or was that entire "story" all in one sentence.... that was like a bad porno, on fast forward, ......in German Effort? good everything else?...... not so much |
| 2004-09-17 01:42:04 | the first time i got laid | then i. then i. then i. what is up with sayin that man. its like you are listing the order of things you did. this is a story not a shopping list. |
| 2004-09-19 04:41:15 | the first time i got laid | No, whats really funny is that while trying to explain why this story was so gramatically wrong, you went and screwed up your own.Bah, the pity is on all of you. |