| 2004-08-04 09:49:58 |
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The Pacific ocean is on the west coast, Florida is on the East coast good story. |
| 2004-09-15 12:12:14 |
Feelings for her
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speech marks man! i cant tell if any1 is talking or not...the story moves on a bit too fast as well... |
| 2004-11-03 08:17:00 |
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fucker, they are called qoutation marks. Good story Mad Boi |
| 2004-11-27 04:36:08 |
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Punctuation. |
| 2005-01-12 01:58:38 |
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fuck man in know it must sound redundant by now but u gata put some quotation marks for when the talk. other wise good very story just remember next tim. |