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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-25 13:36:43 | Béla the Vampire Girl - Part 4 (long) | V.V. good needs some more added. the lenght is fine - you get people into the story. i can see a novel in this, and possibly a film could work great plot. dont listen to the bad reports. they no jackshit about writing. |
| 2005-05-28 05:26:29 | Béla the Vampire Girl - Part 4 (long) | A true masterpiece! Incredible story-telling! I want to see this become a novel! It definitely isn't porn, but for a dark fantasy it makes one hell of a read! I'm hooked... keep me posted. Guero |
| 2005-06-09 05:35:18 | Béla the Vampire Girl - Part 4 (long) | Hmmm, comic books, movies ...this is one great character ...and yes she should be obviously in a long line of good tradition ...spared. She's too fun to say bye to! Overall 9/10 easily (slight inconsistancies are the only flaw). Feel free to bring on a Chapter 5 ~smiles~TY |
| 2005-06-13 19:11:09 | Béla the Vampire Girl - Part 4 (long) | Thanks for your warm comments, B. I rewrote the first 4 sections while I was writing the final book - switching from one to the other when I ran into a snag that I needed to work out in my head. Any inconsistencies in the early chapters are probably due to that poor writing practice. If you tell me what they are, I'll happily correct them in an updated version. I will probably (eventually) find them myself, but a friendly critic pointing out an error would be appreciated. LOL DanK |
| 2005-09-01 00:59:46 | Béla the Vampire Girl - Part 4 (long) | good job man. make more chapts:P 10/10 |