| 2005-01-22 12:43:04 |
Feelings for her
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learn geography the pacific ocean is over by cali not florida thats the alantic |
| 2005-02-28 19:50:10 |
Feelings for her
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Um. That was stupid. There are such things called commas and quotation marks, and various other types of punctuation. And on top of that, you have you're facts all wrong. I can't believe you posted this shit. It has such a weak plot. You need to go to grammar school. Then go to writing school you fucking dumbass |
| 2005-05-04 16:19:36 |
Feelings for her
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Next time use quotation marks... |
| 2005-11-26 10:13:11 |
Feelings for her
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HOW DID YOU SWITCH FROM CALIFORNIA BEACH TO FLORIDA BEACH IN ONE PARAGRAPH? |
| 2004-06-24 03:23:46 |
HIGHWAY BLOWJOB
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shoulda taken more time with it, unrealistic, confusing |