| 2004-08-27 17:36:17 |
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Well I have to say it pretty much SUCKED ASS! It was the worst story I've ever read on this site. You repeated the girls name like 50 freakin' times and the whole sex scene was terrible. Sorry, but it was really horrible. Do us all a favor and don't write anymore stories. EVER!!!! |
| 2004-09-07 00:16:20 |
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I DUN NOE BIGGIN. ARE U GAY MAN??? CUZ IF U DUN LIKE THIS STORY THEN U MUST BE GAY OR DUN NOE WAT ITS LIKE TO GET LAID. DIS SHYT RULLLLESSSSSSS |
| 2004-09-17 21:30:58 |
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I couldnt have ask for a better story as a turn on...I just hope there is a sequal, where he does her mother like he did her...Great Story |
| 2004-09-27 01:50:49 |
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im sorry but this story gets a 5/10... u need more word verition...at times it got boring to read fore words like "ass" and "anne" were repeating constantly. I rate these things on grammer/paragraphs and this story had little of either..... if u do write another please try to deversify the story a lil and be more detailed on the sex sences.... |
| 2004-09-27 17:54:17 |
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about 6.5/10. it was good and shit but just lacked sum finese in the writing style and a bit more description would have made it more interesting. a sequel wud be good tho |