| 2004-07-20 14:00:53 |
12 is too young
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dude that fucking sucked ,fuccking dumbass.unrealistic . learn how to fucking spell. fucking dickweed. |
| 2004-07-21 00:37:31 |
12 is too young
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You fucking idiot... you started off in 1st person and then at the end it says "he rubbed her titties". |
| 2004-07-21 18:35:37 |
12 is too young
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SUCKED!! You need more paragraph structure and you need to stick with one style. |
| 2004-07-21 23:13:48 |
12 is too young
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crap. Learn how to write properly. |
| 2004-07-22 13:14:47 |
12 is too young
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that fucking sucked |